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EllaXxXx
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PostSubject: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptySat 12 Mar - 17:55

Unwanted Destiny



People order, People scrutinize

I am tired of living these lies

To men I am feeble and weak

Not worth the upkeep

But my spirit is strong willed

Yet in men’s society it must be killed

So at night I write about the things I hold dear

To my secret sisters who can not be near

I long to be

Only free

To have a voice

To have a choice

But I know This can not be

For I have been taught this is not my destiny
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((i wrote this about chinese society or atleast the traditional society. Where women were only seen as a burden. They had no one except their 'old same' who they would write Nu SHu (secret womens writing) to eachother. ))
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptySun 27 Mar - 19:21

wow..its really good.
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyWed 25 May - 20:11

aww thank you! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyWed 25 May - 20:13

No prob. XD I write too and I know I like it when ppl comment on my poems and stuff. i like good and bad. XD

But it wasa great poem XD
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptySun 29 May - 12:19

((haha alrighty:) ))
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyTue 31 May - 12:10

wow, that is deep. i just about cryed! =) lol jk. well, it was good, really, really good.
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyWed 1 Jun - 13:39

aw thanks, josh! Smile Im glad you think so!
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyWed 1 Jun - 13:41

were we friends on mdw? i swear i had a friend with your name! lol
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyWed 1 Jun - 13:49

yes we were lol and we're friends on facebook now haha
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyThu 2 Jun - 11:26

YEAH! lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyThu 2 Jun - 14:43

Lol glad you remember me haha:)
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyThu 2 Jun - 17:56

how could i forget you. let me add, you are bloody smoking! and to my current gf. i was complamenting her, i swear love! lol
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyThu 2 Jun - 18:14

Lol what about your current gf? and thanks? Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyThu 2 Jun - 18:20

yes. it was a complament. and i don't want it to sound like i like someone else.
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyThu 2 Jun - 18:24

OH!! I get it! Im sorry Im a little slow today - lack of sleep. Razz haa
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyMon 6 Jun - 13:56

lol. well, yeah, i might not be on for a while. been down in the dumps you might say.
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PostSubject: Re: Unwanted Destiny   Unwanted Destiny EmptyWed 8 Jun - 23:19

Aw alright/
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